by mack_the_knife
Your comment caused me to give thought to a 'cast' for Solitary Arrow. However, Arnie is far too old for the early-twenties Harlen. I propose the following cast members-
Harlen - Christian Bale, Hyandai - Amanda Bynes (mainly to see her nekkid), Trevir - Nick Price (child actor), Tammer - Sean Connery, Ceriandel - Johnny Depp, Loskenhour - Jennifer Connelly, and Wendy - Alexis Bledel.
I figure that cast would make just the performer budget about $200 million, give or take $25 million.
Regarding comments by msboy8.Does he not realise that Feldarian grammar differs from our usage?Once again an excellent story,can't wait for the movie to come out,starring Arnie and ?
Excellent story. Now if you would just stop writing all that other crap and give us more H&H I won't have to track you down and chain you to your computer. On a critical note: Is there something wrong with the word pussy? You have used every other possible word, including technical terms. It's like I can feel a pause before whatever word you use while you try to think of one you haven't used yet. Have you thought of using none at all?Example: Change He spread her opening wide and rammed his cock in. To: He spread her wide and rammed his cock in.Not elegant writing I admit but it shows my suggestion.Loved the story. Keep it up
I will have words with her about this. Confusing is for his is unacceptable. I shall do something rather...odd...to her tonight for her punishment. Amazing how much agony missing something by a mere 1.5 inches can cause.
Your story is such a pleasure to read! I love the way you combine elements of a great fantasy novel, such as the exciting adventures Hyandai and Harlen experience out in the woods or when they retrieve the 'Ehladrel , with very visual descriptions of the sensual and intimate moments they share. Thanks a lot for posting your stories here. I check everyday to see if there's a new one.
Perhaps you shoud have a word with your editor, hehe. I found an "is" that should nave been "his" haha. The writing was up to your usual excellent style. Thanks.