All Comments on 'The Start of Something New'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Amazing!

I LOVE IT! So sensual, sweet, and realistic.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 12 years ago
The beginning

The beginning of a great story, but stopping like that is a tease and just plain Rude!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Anxiously awaiting Chapter 2.

adventurouscpladventurouscplabout 12 years agoAuthor

Thanks everyone, Chapter 2 is in progress shall be submitted soon :)

CajunBillCajunBillabout 12 years ago
Nice start

Very little background... story needs some buildup. Then, of course you need at least one more chapter. Keep on writing.

2275jr2275jrabout 12 years ago
The first touch of cum to taste

awesome first story THE START OF SOMETHING NEW ch1 .

love this first part can't wait to read more of how she felt with his virgin cock inside her virgin pussy do keep them cumming

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