by KemMyst
No wait, that sounds more like 'Animal Lover', and this certainly is not. You have again surprised me. And although this might look like a woman getting her justified revenge, I see it as a love story. That Val loved Alison enough to not only let her sodomize Joshua, but that he took part in it to make her happy. And lets face it, Alison was brutal to Joshua. Not that he didn't deserve it, but what sweet/rancid revenge. Val just loves her that much! He did promise that they might be able to find a man to suit Alison's unique need in occasion. (Maybe on those rare occasions you could again tell their stories)
Too dark,depraved and vengeful for my taste.
I want animal lover!!!!!!
Do not detract from the animal lover!!!!!
We've got to have the animal lover!!!!!!!
your story was a good story even though it had male on male sex on it which is not my cup of tea i did enjoy the revenge factor. i still think that animal lover is your best work so far it is nice to see you expand out and try new ideas please keep on writing and posting. Please update Animal Lover as soon as you can
It is nice to see that low-life get what he deserved. I cant stand guys like that. I wish all mistreated women got the chance to do something like this to those who hurt them. Thank you for this gratifying story.
You need an editor, BADLY! Your story was good but the touch of an editor would improve it greatly!.