All Comments on 'The Therapist Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

finish finish! please?!?!?!

love4811love4811about 14 years ago
Oh My

You are playing with us. You give us just enough then you leave us wanting more. So unfair.

grunabonagrunabonaabout 14 years ago
*****

As with the first chapter, needs better editing, but I like it.

honeybreehoneybreealmost 14 years ago
wonderful, so 5 stars

cory just gets interesting with each sentence and jake has that sexy alpha male quality to him that is so hot and adorable. But the only problem is you might want to watch your transitions when you go to the next scene, for example the session to the bar, then the bar to her home. it was all kind of abrupt instead of smooth, but other than that it is a wonderful story

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
She

needs to just take it one step at a time and see where it goes, no one said that she had to have sex with him to get to know him.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 9 years ago

All three of them would've been in the dog house... so wrong lol

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