by Brownrice_sugar
You are playing with us. You give us just enough then you leave us wanting more. So unfair.
cory just gets interesting with each sentence and jake has that sexy alpha male quality to him that is so hot and adorable. But the only problem is you might want to watch your transitions when you go to the next scene, for example the session to the bar, then the bar to her home. it was all kind of abrupt instead of smooth, but other than that it is a wonderful story
needs to just take it one step at a time and see where it goes, no one said that she had to have sex with him to get to know him.