All Comments on 'The Transporter'

Well written, great characters! Just wish the build up had been a bit slower or the period of adjustment following that hot breakfast had been shown.

I liked this. Your voice character is well realised and sympathetic. Her feelings for the the Japanese girl are warm and generous. It's a lovely piece of work. Bravo.

If it has a fault it is brevity; I would like Sashi's character fleshed out more.

Somthing like this could actually happen. I like the story and that its not all sex I think is a bit short I would have liked more from the Japanese girl, will you continue the story?

I liked this for its realism, there should be a sequel! Congratulations "Happyday"

Please continue to avoid the sad style of "3D breasts" and "30 inch waist" which spoiled another of your stories.

A nice five-stars worth story but it finished perhaps a little abruptly. It could have done with a little more to flesh it out.

Not long enough!! :D

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!