All Comments on 'The Try Outs Ch. 03'

Great to see more from you! Hope you keep up the great work :)

Happy to see you still writing. Please continue.

So dambed hot, finished up fucking my brains out with the two girls next door, and geting drunk on cunt juice

These long absences are tough.

Is there anyway you could write a sequel to the "John's Case Gets Complicated" where the poor bastard gets to fuck someone? I don't care if it's his wife, the evil attorney, a stripper, or his daughter.

On the other hand, write whatever you want. Just please keep writing. Thanks for this latest addition. Right before OU weekend. As a Texas fan, I sure hope this isn't a bad omen.

"Nahhhh!...Ahhh!...don´t leave us hanging in the air ....

We want to know what that Luisa has in store for him!

And Amanda hasn´t used her heels, yet.

Greeting us with a

"to be concluded...maybe...probably" is pure denial!

Please next chapter ... asap!

Truly excellent as always, please continue writing !

You are one of the top three writers on this site in my opinion. Your stories are always so hot, descriptive, and just generally excellent.

Really wish you would write more often!

One of the best writers on this site, hands down!

Superb storytelling continues in this third chapter of what is a gripping and powerful drama. Beautifully written, with well-defined characters that really come alive to the reader, the plot in this chapter moves at a steady pace, building towards a truly compelling conclusion. Five stars.