All Comments on 'The Twelve Zenati Pt. 15'

Ellie, gripping as usual, you are without doubt a wonderful author spinning fantastic yarns. Can't wait for the next instalment, but will :)

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Well that told him. I'm glad someone wiped the cocky smirk off Apollo's face. So if he was charged with "checking" on the girls then I am guessing that should not have included an intimate relationship. Kind of put him in a position of power that he abused. The poor Battaglia always fuck up somehow. I think they will realise the mistake of trusting this narcissistic little shit!

Love how you left us wanting more. I am dying to see what comes next. Thanks, it was wonderful as usual. :)

About time Apollo had that self satisfied smile wiped off his face, as well as having a good kick in the ego!

Thank you for this chapter Ellie. As always, looking forward to reading more, as/when you can post it.

Jules

Three strikes and Apollo is out. Now if Marcella will just pry open her clam shell heart so Noah can reach the pearl inside. Great chapter.

Proof reading failed a few times, punctuation with commas in random spots and grammar (loathe not loath)

Also I'm.so stupid haha, It only just clicked that this story isn't really focusing on the heads of the Zenati (yet anyway) and thanks for clearing up that Marcella and Olivia are not table sisters (sisters to Nathaniel etc)

Love love love it

when you start skipping the sex parts to get to the next storyevolution...

Great story- I agree with Teehaha- skipping parts to see how the story unwinds

Thanks Ellie, your stories have great details and I’m totally addicted to reading them.

I, too, agree with Teehaa about skipping forward to more of the unfolding story. I hope there are many more Tables stories to come! You are an excellent storyteller, Ellie. Thanks for sharing your talent with all of us. I've read all your stories at least twice and hope Pt 16 of the Zenati series comes along soon.

I love your Tables saga, but it is sometimes hard to keep track of the family lines and all the names. Have you ever considered including a Twelve Tables Family Tree with branches for each of the Twelve Tables at the beginning of each book? That would be a nice point of reference. It could even be listed as a separate publication with a link that your adoring fans could easily access. That way, we could keep it on display on a separate open tab when we are reading, allowing us to connect the dots between the many names that pop up throughout your richly layered stories.

That said, I am totally addicted to your Twelve Tables masterpieces. Like many have said before, I would buy them. Thank you for so generously sharing your gift. Also, I hope you are recovering nicely. Godspeed.

I’m scared. There’s 41 parts so I know it’s going to have lots of twists and turns. I need them all happily ever after and I’m on my period, so no deaths so I won’t cry all night 🥴🤣

Apollo and Marcella deserve each other.

Noah can do WAY better