All Comments on 'The Two Couples: Prolog'

hey keep it up, no writer has ever taken this topic

it is poised interestingly now.... hope you can kee the momentum, looking forward to reading the part two

Fine man, waiting for other chapters

Dear Jadway,

We Indians and Pakistanis write terribly with some exception like yours. You are a passionate wife lover like me. Your story "The Two Couples - Prologue" was lovely. I would like you also to read my stories. "Indian couples in loving threesome with a male friend" and other stories. you could clickon my name and see my submissions. I do hope you read them and write back.

Love you,

Raj,

iloveall

Good narration. Lets see of the main story is intresting enougj. 3 stars to start with. Idea seems great. Fingures crossed.

Very nice story and excellent narration.

The WHEN, WHERE & HOW DO I GET TO READ THE REMANING PARTS?

its a nice start for both the couples.

Dear Jadway,

The first part of your story was superb. Hope the second shall be equally gripping.