by JJ Jadway
Dear Jadway,
The first part of your story was superb. Hope the second shall be equally gripping.
The WHEN, WHERE & HOW DO I GET TO READ THE REMANING PARTS?
Good narration. Lets see of the main story is intresting enougj. 3 stars to start with. Idea seems great. Fingures crossed.
Dear Jadway,
We Indians and Pakistanis write terribly with some exception like yours. You are a passionate wife lover like me. Your story "The Two Couples - Prologue" was lovely. I would like you also to read my stories. "Indian couples in loving threesome with a male friend" and other stories. you could clickon my name and see my submissions. I do hope you read them and write back.
Love you,
Raj,
iloveall
it is poised interestingly now.... hope you can kee the momentum, looking forward to reading the part two