by glynndah
You write very very well, and your serial tale of the enchanted dress leads from one episode to the next with a compelling rise in the erotic stakes each time! Sex is deftly done, with light rapid strokes raising the temperature without resort to verbal miasma. You leave your reader begging for more! What could be better?
Fantastic story. Loved the way the dress moved through space and time bringing such wonderfully orgasmic results. Thank you and I look forward to number 4 if you chose to share it with us.
Very Hot! Loved it. You're an amazing writer! All of your Ultimate Desire Dress stories are great and I can't wait for you to post more.
The story was hot and so well written, I was barely able to contain myself, if you know what I mean. Excellent job!
The previous comment was made by an idiot.
your story was pointless i never heard of semeone ultiment desire was too watch a guy to jack off.