All Comments on 'The Uniformed Officer'

The story is great but I couldn't get into it because every damn time you meant "breath", I'm assuming meaning to take in air, you typed "breadth" meaning the width of an object. It seems to me that if you're going to take the time to write something you may as well be sure it's grammatically correct. Just a suggestion from a frustrated reader...:)

Nice work! It was a very hot, intense story...please continue this one, because I would like to know what happens when she returns next week...Happy Writing!!