All Comments on 'The Unwilling'

This is a well told tale, with excellent imagery conveying a strong knowledge of the subject matter. I enjoyed this one a lot. Good luck in the contest!

...for once, no pun intended. This peek-thru-the-keyhole into someone else's life is astonishing, fascinating, and _creepy_. A Halloween tale if ever there was one! Best of luck in the contest.

My father used to transport the dead to funeral homes, right around the time I started doing birth work. It's amazing the things you see, when you work so closely with the Scylla and Charibdis of life. This was an amazing tale, one I won't soon forget. Thank you so much for sharing it, and the best of luck to you in the contest!

I loved your story. Very creepy,and knowing that it actually happened makes it that much spookier.

you sure write a load of creepy stories! haha XD good for reading once in a while! any more than that and my heart would stop -.-

Nice spooky tale. Makes you want to go to a funeral.

WAY more information than I ever wanted on that subject. Thanks anyway.