All Comments on 'The Vampire Mates'

This was so fun. I totally dig anything Vampire. It was almost like you were there. Couldn't be though, could it?

an excellent 1st time with thought and exquiste timing take care and let each story in future enfold in your mind before commiting to print

...BUT (a big but here) you wrote it exceptionally well that you drew the readers attention in. So-much-so it was as if we were really inside there witnessing the whole erotic consummation. Really, it was written very well despite the lack of dialogues. A word added here and there and you took a simple story to a new height. Now that is what I call true talent. For ex; in paragraph 28, you wrote "As it hit in an incredible burst of speed he thrust into her hard, his own passion reaching its head as he spilled his seed into her and bit the <I>vulnerable</I> flesh of her neck, drinking as he let it take him'. - By adding the word vulnerable you make the story even more outstanding. It gives the reader a sense of what the vampire was actually doing as though we were the vampire himself. You, certainly have a way with words and it's remarkable read. Thanks so much for such fine writing. Looking forward more to your submissions.

I really loved it and I hope you write more!

A verbal masterpiece for the palate. Heavy and heady at the same time - loaded with eroticism in each sentence, and dripping with it in each paragraph.

A definite MUST READ... and this MUST HAVE a sequel!!

I can't wait to read more of your writings......Gypzie

This is my kind of erotic story: nonhuman characters, belonging eternally to each other, that underlying sense of control and change. So beautiful and erotic. Thank you so much for submitting this.

A vampire tale that also appeals to those like me who are not particularly interested in vampires!

Keep up the good work

HB, i luvved this one. Vamps make me tingle all over. Guess its the biting factor. Write more of these when you get the time, please!!

I love your use of language here. I thought this story was well done and beautifully played out. Excellent.

story! HornyBabe1965