All Comments on 'The Vampire Next Door Ch. 04'

I like your story, but, you could really use an editor.

looking forward to more thank you for posting

Helen and Sam ....what they did for love. I liked this chapter but I don't know why Helen had to be fed off of for so long with Sam not coming to her rescue sooner. I'm sure she will think about that before the wedding. She has given up so much for him but what will he give up for her.

Great chapter!

nadali

When Sam ask Helen do you trust me I knew what was coming. This is another great chapter and it makes me want more so keep them coming.

Loved it

cut the music off so i could focus.....Superb chapter!

You've captured the sexual synergy of your characters right out the gate. So much so manner that any scene in which they appear together sexual coupling must be apart of it or it just seems a bit lacking. Their sexually energy together invites voyeurism not that I am a voyeur( yum) the sex in this story in a word ...delicious decadence. Looking forward to the update.

Defiantly the BEST CHAPTER thus far.

but you've gotta LOVE Samuel!

Love Samuel and Helen together. Dislike his parents for sure! Too bad there's no more chapters. I loved this story!