by SavannahMann
A better demonstration in the LA club would have included a ballet demonstration of grace and positions. This would show off more of the training that is for sale and the power that comes with the control you have over your slave. And then do the whipping.
Very well written. Easy to follow and a really good read!
I think this series is one of my all time favorite reads, can't wait for the next chapter!
Yet another great chapter, i've read it twice now and can't wait for the next one, PLEASE HURRY !!!!
yet another great chapter in the story. as always, wondering when the next one will pop up! just letting you know we appreciate the time you put in and are eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Have loved this series from the start and tell all of my friends to read this keep up the story.
- you are keeping the pot on the boil. The plot and the character development continue at a very good pace. I enjoyed your use of italics to reveal Ann's thoughts. The typos and a misspelling were the only(minor) distractions. Thank you for continuing the story.