All Comments on 'The Vegas Adventure Ch. 01-03'

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Anonymousover 18 years ago

Awesome Read - Wonderful Characters

What a great story. Your characters are so rich and alive. Most authors don't take the time to develop them they just get straight to the sex. Nothing wrong with great sex scenes mind you, but they are so much richer when you can identify with the characters.

Excellent job, can't wait to see what happens to hot little De Ann next.

Anonymousover 18 years ago

An AWESOME story, can't wait to read the rest

i read one of the other comments and have to agree. This story has some character development behind it. It's a great story that draws the reader to imagining being right there with the action. i absolutely can't wait to read the rest. submdj@yahoo.com

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I love to be aroused by the thoughts in my mind. Combine that with the ideas from someone else's mind and soon I end up constantly motivated to make the erotic dream better. Some of those dreams become stories. I am haunted by an idea until I get it on paper. If it causes ...

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