All Comments on 'The Vetting Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
excellent

A good story well told with a hint of humour I look forward to your next

James UK

Storm113Storm113over 9 years ago
Kind of liked it

It took way too long for the romance to develope. Not too long a story, too long from the time they met until they married.

CHICKWILLIAMCHICKWILLIAMover 9 years ago
GREAT STORYTELLING!

I have enjoyed just about everything I've read of yours, this story is no exception! You are very close to the top of my favorite authors here! Thanks for some very enjoyable reading! Keep em coming!!

nestorb30nestorb30over 3 years ago

not sure if I liked it or not. Kind of passive main character which I find personally uncomfortable

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Read

as the first gentleman was by her side as she was sworn in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i feel like there wasnt really any "romance". tbh anna was being a cold-ass bitch to justin under the disguise of trying to "intrigue" him. im not saying i wanted "i love you"s to show their love but other than sex and some form of friendship, i didnt really see what would (atleast) generally come under romance. it seemed more like an fwb that got more convenient for the both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's not a romance you idiot. Where is intimacy between the couple's they are just dominant and helping each other in businesses. It should be categorised as erotic Coupling 🤦🏼‍♂️

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