by Amyfriend
I think the story started really well at Ch. 1 but rather slipped as things progressed. I suggest going from no intercourse to actual intercourse so quickly was a mistake. There could have been a lot more 'fooling around' at home and elsewhere first! Still good though!
Might I suggest one well-placed Clitty Piercing to reactivate your orgasmic libido?
MY God, I knew a woman like her and my greatest joy was to suck her clit for what seemed like hours as she rode from climax to climax...then finished by sucking me and fingering my ass....more stories please !
M
Loved it, loved it, loved it. Especially the lyrical and visceral phrase "thousand fiery needles." Yup, that's how I remember it.
I'm glad you didn't turn Debbie into a prostitute. I was worried for a while, there.
You are so fucking gifted, Amyfriend. I know I'm not the only one on Lit begging you on both knees to write Chapter 5.
Very nice style. The characters were interesting. The description of the action had a nice rhythm to it that really gave a sense of the excitement and pleasure that they were feeling. Excellent vocalizations as well. I very much hope for more in this story and look forward to reading your other stories.
My,My,My! That was steamy! Thanks for the story, i'll be back, hoping to find more episodes. as a girl w/ a teeny clit, Im jealous, I want a mega clit too!!DAMN! millisande
Wonderful story!!
Stories of girls with big clits are rare.
Eager on reading the next chapter.
Any idea when it will be published?
Thanks!
B-Man