All Comments on 'The Warrior's Song'

That was a enchanting story. I was so taken by your words. Native American stories/mythology have always held a special place in my heart. There are quite a few similarities to my own lifes story in here too. Quite uncanny to say the least. Bravo, bravo I very much enjoyed your submission. Keep up the wonderful work.

A really well written and thought out story. I loved the metiphysiscal plain and that the attacker was human. Gave the story a realistic quality. Please write more.

The almost tangible spell of tension and the Native American folklore are woven together superbly. Really enjoyable story, thanks for sharing.

This was a great story. Thank you Cloudy for sharing it with us. I hope you will share more someday.

Loved this piece my friend. Beautiful love story, enchanting with the grace, wisdom and power that only you could possess. Bravo.

Na'chi, taka nod'a hawa (baby)

Many Feathers

that more people would understand the lives of others