All Comments on 'The Wedding Ch. 03'

I know some people feel rebellious about not learning to write properly in English, but you must at least learn the basics.

love it more chapters please

I thought it was fantastic, I have been following these for a while now, very excited to see how it continues.

"I know some people feel rebellious about not learning to write properly in English, but you must at least learn the basics."

Spare me your pretentiousness (yeah, I know big English words too).

To the author...great job. Enjoyed reading this story.

you did well a good twist

This is the fourth time I've come back to read this tale of love and lust. 'The Wedding', and 'Canceled Date Night' where an absolute wonderful read, However; if you decide to revisit this story,I would recommend that "Canceled Date night be edited down from 6 chapters, to one, with a bridge story between it and 'The Wedding'. 'The Wedding" could be tightened up into one, ie, Chapter 2. of a continuing storyline. It's been several years now and it would be interesting to see which way you decided to run the relationship between the three protagonists. As it stands now; both were exultant tales in their own right, I just need...

Just wow

People forgive infidelity way too easily these days.