by kinglem
This is the fourth time I've come back to read this tale of love and lust. 'The Wedding', and 'Canceled Date Night' where an absolute wonderful read, However; if you decide to revisit this story,I would recommend that "Canceled Date night be edited down from 6 chapters, to one, with a bridge story between it and 'The Wedding'. 'The Wedding" could be tightened up into one, ie, Chapter 2. of a continuing storyline. It's been several years now and it would be interesting to see which way you decided to run the relationship between the three protagonists. As it stands now; both were exultant tales in their own right, I just need...
"I know some people feel rebellious about not learning to write properly in English, but you must at least learn the basics."
Spare me your pretentiousness (yeah, I know big English words too).
To the author...great job. Enjoyed reading this story.
I thought it was fantastic, I have been following these for a while now, very excited to see how it continues.
I know some people feel rebellious about not learning to write properly in English, but you must at least learn the basics.