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Click here"I'm really sorry guys." she said, her voice shaking, "I hope you know that."
Dave kissed the top of her head.
"It's ok, it's behind us now. It all worked out."
"Yeah, you more than made up for it Sarah." Colleen added, "Thank you for that, you proved your commitment and your love for me and Dave. We won't forget that."
She leaned over and kissed Sarah.
"We forgive you."
Sarah teared up again and buried her face back in Dave's shoulder to hide it.
Colleen smiled at Dave and gave him a peck too. Then with a smirk she said;
"Now the real fun begins."
This is the fourth time I've come back to read this tale of love and lust. 'The Wedding', and 'Canceled Date Night' where an absolute wonderful read, However; if you decide to revisit this story,I would recommend that "Canceled Date night be edited down from 6 chapters, to one, with a bridge story between it and 'The Wedding'. 'The Wedding" could be tightened up into one, ie, Chapter 2. of a continuing storyline. It's been several years now and it would be interesting to see which way you decided to run the relationship between the three protagonists. As it stands now; both were exultant tales in their own right, I just need...
"I know some people feel rebellious about not learning to write properly in English, but you must at least learn the basics."
Spare me your pretentiousness (yeah, I know big English words too).
To the author...great job. Enjoyed reading this story.