by DottieWom
but maybe a few too many ... in between words! Didn't stop me reading though. Enjoyed it, thanx xxx
ooooooo god, to be dottie, oooo sooo jealous lol
well written, can't wait for another submission :)
as much as the idea of giving up my entire being to someone else creeps me out, this was a really well written story. frankly, i was a little more turned on than i should have been. i know i could never do what she did, but it was still fun to think about.