by Yinisanalterego
Very nice I liked it. Hope more chapters start coming in. I'm curious of why he left?
HI. I think this story has great potential and really like it so far. I am looking forward to reading further chapters. The good thing about not knowing why he left, just makes you want to read more to find out. well done!
Hi. Wonderful start to a story. I really hope you continue, I can't wait to see where it takes us. And for some reason, I am just enthralled in the love story of the David and Marci!! Thanks!!