All Comments on 'The Younger Master'

I tried, I tried to read and like this, but I couldn't.

This was a jumbled ball of mess says the man, younger master from Eiringel or Aan, who thought a fir tree was an outer covering of another person's not quite human furry ear.

I know this is fantasy, but after reading this, I couldn't get pass the fact that catboy should've been treeman.

A bit jumpy and I had to reread a few places to confirm what it meant. Tweaks here and there and it could be very good