All Comments on 'Their First Date'

I just loved the plot line. Don

A terrible story. It had no foundation and no true dialogue. It never attempts to tell the reader how it got to this point, and I see no way it can get better. Thanks for nothing.

Good one - we all love a slut Mummy, they're fucking great!

He should make sure little Kitty is so loved by him that she will follow him where ever he goes.He should make his love for her so strong, that she will let no one else use her body.She should be totally submissive to him in return for his complete love and devotion.....Rich

Keep contuning this story...hope he knockes her up!