All Comments on 'There Will Be Time Ch. 02'

I must apologize about the time jumps. I thought for sure that large spacing would indicate different parts in the submission. I know the read had to be confusing... Well, now I know what to do for the next submission.

cos i dont know what I just read!!!

I want to re-post it so that people will know what the heck is going on... how do I....?

Grrrrrrhh.

When is the next chapter ready this is great more please.

Please repost. this as potential, but you jump around a lot. in your writing, you assume you have mentioned causes, but you didn't, example: you stated that the fangs were gone... but I don't see where you ever mentioned them appearing. Maybe you did on ch.2 page 1, but I never read it. I think I can follow your intentions, but get an editor. I say This because I noticed writing mistakes of my own and should have used an editor. Keep writing.

Taking the advice of black_maestra I'm now in search of a new editor. My old one disappeared on me, so I've got no feedback except that of you lovely people. I'm going to readdress this chapter and repost as soon as I can. Bare with me ;).

Really hope to see another chapter! It's a really good story!!