All Comments on 'This Means War Ch. 01'

I am a little confused. At first she was devastated to have to leave the country she had been born and raised in, but by the end it seemed she had only been there a short while? I understand putting a front on for the officers, but the story changed midway.

Yeah this was confusing, if she was trying to leave why was she begging saying it was her place of birth, if she had to put on a front all she had to do was cry and you could've said that she was pretending

Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to next chapters.

My next chapter will be submitted soon. It's being edited a second time since I made some changes after a bit of a critique from my new editor. Thanks!

~Dimidiae