All Comments on 'Those Days of...Ch. 11-15'

While this is obviously a story to arouse first and foremost, it also has emotional depth, which is good. The more you care for the characters, the better the sex scenes. However, there is one very strange omission. The main character said he was mostly happily married, then wham, his wife shacks up with another woman and he with another woman and you hardly hear another word about their marriage. He would have to be feeling SOME emotion, but so far absolutely nothing. What of a divorce? Reconcilliation? Etc... I hope you explore the Julia character in the next part because it could make good drama AND good sex scenes. It would be great to ultimately end up with a foursome, but you need to prepare the way there. :)

awesome story..nice emotional buildup..I'm looking forward to the sex scene w/Barbara & Helen

I really loved it with the Barbera and helen but i think i know where the conflict with Roger and barbera hes probably worried that he will end up like luke that barbera will try to steal Roger from Helen and push her away from him.

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga