All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 03'

More more....love this story so far.

you just had to stop there. Why, O Why :). I hope to see another update very soon. O, by the way you have awesome detail and an interesting story plot going on here, It's like I'm watching a movie.

Thanks for the awesome read, Shanee

It was getting so good!

Thanks for the new chapter! It is getting to be really interesting, apart from the sexy appeal, that is! Keep up the good work!

That was fantastic. There is some real good quality writing.

Want to know more about they both are. Keep writing please!

I like both characters, I liked the changing perspectives when they weren't too repetitive. I could really visualize the club and the atmosphere. I definitely want to find out what happens next.

Questions- Why didn't Ash come to find her? He invited her but then didn't look for her all night, even when she sent someone to tell him she was there? What's up with that?

I cant wait to find out more!!! Please write again soon!

The worst part of finding a great series; finding one in progress. uhh... I forgot, Please!

Now how cool was that for a cliffhanger...... I LOVE IT!!!!!!

bout time wewt. really really loving the story

So glad I decided to catch back up on this story, I'm loving it.

I was wondering why Santana didn't notice the impairing effect of all the alcohol--she's had several shots and at least two cocktails, remember--but regardless of whether she's a vampire, a lycanthrope, or something else in the same vein her body would be able to break down alcohol at a much greater rate than a human.

Still not quite sure what they both are, but I'm content to read on and see. :)

I normally despise alternating first person, but this is awesome. Definite 5 from me. :)

I am liking this. I am glad it has been completed.

You are incorrect when you say it has been completed we have been waiting for months for the next installment although you will enjoy all the chapters you haven't read yet they are awesome!

Now THIS is more like it!!!!!!