All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent

That was sweet and sad.I am happy Ana recognizes Alex as her mate and sad at her history,Very good chapter,I like the uniqueness of this story.Well done so far.

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsover 12 years ago
Great story!

You have a great story comming along. It's hard to make Were stories unique, but you are doing a great job. Keep the chapters comming fast and furious! lol

Avitreader80Avitreader80over 12 years ago
Nice...

I really love this story, and am so ready to read more. Please keep up the great work..

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 12 years ago
Can't believe I almost missed this one

Great story, can't wait for the next installment!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 12 years ago
Each chapter is better than the last.

Well done! I like the storyline. It's fun having no clue what will happen next. Thanks for writing.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Great story!

Very exciting! I can't wait to see what her father's idea of ultimate security is. I'm guessing that it's a little extreme.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WOW!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

NeptoonNeptoonover 12 years ago
very nice

love the story and was very excited when u told us santanas birthday cause it was the same as mine =p keep up the great writing i am really enjoying the story

MizTMizTover 12 years ago

I can't stop reading, not that I want to! Chapter 6 here I come!

Archangel_MArchangel_Mabout 12 years ago
Just like Underworld...

...only cooler! It's nice to be able to love both protagonists without reservation in a story like this. I love where you're going so far! :)

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 11 years ago
had a feelin'

Had a feelin' my girl was a hybrid on multiple levels. You did a great job cloaking her.

Lovin' the intrigue!!!! This magical combo ought to make for some smokin' hot sex with a full blooded vampire.... Were sexuality is ...well.... intense which really is an understatement......ya think?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Smoking!

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