All Comments on 'Three Is Just Right'

That was really hot especially the wife she was really hot

i cant wait for chapter 2 keep writing.

Pat Murray

Very poorly written, don't waste your time.

The first comment has to be by the author himself--it's just as illiterate as the story. Ordinarily I'd suggest an editor, but a story as bad in so many ways as this one is would probably make an editor's head explode.

It was a good story but it felt a little rushed. Take some time and describe thing (i.e. the mood, her breasts, the tingle of her spine as her orgasmed, ect..) Don't just tell me what happened, make me FEEL what the character is feeling. This exact same story could have been three times as long and ten times better. I gave you a high rating because it is your first story and I know with just a little contructive critisism story number two will be great.

See dick get Jane..see Jane get two doicks...see the readers click off...see Jane run...shiiiittttt...This is what kind of crap you get when you do not monitor the ages of posters...

Character names were not the worst of this story in Chello. It read like it was written by someone who should not be on this site. The editors had better start doing their jobs.

Well i think it was a good story, I enjoy these story and i like the hole thing keep it up.

Turned what could be a interesting situation into crap. I did not like it. I told my wife. She did not like it either. She did not squirt when she read it. I did not squirt either. The End

What a great author! He has three characters and can't remember names. Chello, or Cello, a ridiculous name either way.