All Comments on 'Three People, No More Excuses. Ch. 01'

You have painted a very erotic but very loving scene. Excellent descriptions and characterizations of their feelings as well as their actions. Sexy.

Hot! You've really got a knack for sensual detail... everything sounds so luxurious. The alternation between the poetic expression of your descriptions and the rough talk of your characters makes for a great contrast. And the story? Let's just say I found the idea of locking eyes with my spread-eagled girlfriend while fucking someone else's mouth... "inspiring." Look forward to reading more from you!