All Comments on 'Three Play'

Scorching hot story, simple and straight forward. The use of & instead of and was a little annoying though.

i really like the way you built it up with the dancing before the really fiery stuff.

You crammed a lot into one page!

This is one story I'd like to see more of. A really great first submission.

d story was superb but if Sarah could hv been a bit more relutant first then gave in later ( i felt she gave in too fast)....d story would hv been wonderful....i greatly enjoyed d story.....once again superb story

really love stories of seduction, i agree that sarah could have been a bit more reluctant but all the same mmmm very very good haha

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Awesome story, especially for the first one. I loved how you slowly drew out the action and detailed the descriptions of the characters. Please write more.

As a teacher this really got to me, more please........

Very good story, well defined. And I would bet Sarah would be late getting home quite a few evenings now, especially the next few days!!!

Tim just got hold to a pretty sexy wife and took advaantage. The wife loved it and will keep it her secret.

Tim just got hold to a pretty sexy wife and took advaantage. The wife loved it and will keep it her secret.

As a woman this got my morning off to a great start!