All Comments on 'Tickets to Paradise Ch. 03'

I think not Just a slut wife cuckolding her husband.Real nice. Not!!!!

This paradise is quickly turning into an erotic fantasy island with the addition of the other couple and I like it. Do keep the vacation going.

What happened to the "Faithful" wife at the start of this story? The one who wanted only her husbands dick inside her? Are American wives this dumb and this easy in cucking their husbands? I guess they must be, if this story is anything to go by.

Two things keep this from being much better - one is the use of a narrator to tell the story...it reads like a newspaper summary of a convenience store robbery. The second is the string of coincidences necessary to get Francisco (and now Tony) alone with a drunk, bikini'ed Kelly in their one scrumptious room in a very high-end resort (you, know, the kind that just DO NOT make that type of booking mistake!) Sure, there are a few other niggling quibbles...Tony has to be packing a black fire-hose, Kelly knows Francisco is going after her buns full bore, but still gets drunk despite cherishing her marital bonds ... but those pale in contrast to the Big Two!

You are wrong about the faithful wife's in the good old USA . They stay faithful as long as you can keep them under lock and chain .Let them loose and the faithfulness goes with them . No such thing as a faithful wife anywhere .

Stupid husbands, slut wives shithead friends, =BAD STORY.

Roars with laughter at the author.

There isn't a single cliche that you have missed in this turd of a story