by Jennifer C
I am just loving this story, the way you write is genius mixing heartbreak with humour is so clever making the story both sad and funny at the same time. Also the way you convey emotions is fantastic and so realistic i am sure many women have been torn between 2 men and confused at to where her heart truly lies. Excellent story pls continue.
find out who is the father, and make him pay child support.
but she will probably be stupid and let the fatherhood affect her decision on who she stays with.....
Like all your stories and poems, Jennifer. The talent stands out. Wish I could meet you personally to say it to your face. Keep it up (as the actress said to the bishop)
your penmanship shines in this dramatic and charactor built story, The extensive work is obvious and a delightful read...thanks J...Art~
I already left one comment (came out as anon) but will add another. I love the story almost as much as I wish I could love you, Jennifer.