by KaramelSundae
loved the story, can only hope to see more of your work in the future
This is a pretty good read, although all those dots ( ... ) and the extra !?!?! are distracting. I'm sure this author has what it takes to learn from this and go on to bigger and better things.
Only reason I gave it a FOUR instead of a FIVE was the above.
i enjoy reading all your stories you have a beautiful way of putting your stories in words keep up the good work
It was pretty well written but something seem to be missing. However, it was a pretty hot story. I, also, like writing IR stories involving two people who start out hating one another (i.e., "Pink Slip").
LMAO.
Overall, pretty good story. I'm keeping the dick quote for my own personal use.
Comes in many different sizes and packages, we just have to know when to open them; but to always be appreciative of the giver of the gifts:>)