All Comments on 'To Neighbors...'

by KaramelSundae

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
mmm

loved the story, can only hope to see more of your work in the future

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Try to overlook all the ellipses

This is a pretty good read, although all those dots ( ... ) and the extra !?!?! are distracting. I'm sure this author has what it takes to learn from this and go on to bigger and better things.

Only reason I gave it a FOUR instead of a FIVE was the above.

manwhosejsutflirtmanwhosejsutflirtalmost 20 years ago
ty for sharing

i enjoy reading all your stories you have a beautiful way of putting your stories in words keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Just beautiful!

Loved this story, thanks for writing it!

GuyJDGuyJDover 19 years ago
Great story

It was pretty well written but something seem to be missing. However, it was a pretty hot story. I, also, like writing IR stories involving two people who start out hating one another (i.e., "Pink Slip").

sunniisunniiover 17 years ago
"Go-Go Gadget Dick"

LMAO.

Overall, pretty good story. I'm keeping the dick quote for my own personal use.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
A Gift...

Comes in many different sizes and packages, we just have to know when to open them; but to always be appreciative of the giver of the gifts:>)

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