by MelloT
LOVED this chapter and cant wait for more.. you are one of my top top top top authors on this site!!! hope to see another chapter soon :) jacinta xxO
cant wait for the next chapter. love your writing
This story has grown on me and I am so looking forward to your next chapter. Great work.
Please post another chapter soon, I cant wait to know what happens next :D
A little birdy told me that you had submitted the next chapter...they sure are taking forever getting it up...
The detail of her training and mental processes are well done and believable. This chapter ended and towards #4. Thank you.
how could she have received 70 from the paddle, (I won't even mention how unrealistic that is,) and she didn't even react a little when he swatted her ass? not to mention how she sat or layed on the bed on her back?????
The lack of important details like that ruin a story and it's ruined it for me
Kate
I love this series. It's really quite accurate despite what people keep commenting, maybe happening just a bit too quick for her. The person on the last chapter commented about how she wouldn't enjoy it if it was rape but that is simply not true, mentally you may not enjoy it but physically you will if he's trying to make you enjoy it. At least sexually. My father likes to say the same thing but I was forced to have sex ajd it was the first and only time a man was able to make me orgasm. Sorry for the long comment but those other people were pissing me off
She is obviously starting to discover her primal womanhood, and to fall in love with him. A promising start...