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All Comments on 'Todd and Mrs. Kaplan'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Shutter?

Maybe you mean shudder?

Learn to write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Age is all wrong

I don't think you realize how a woman aged 55 would also not have a 6 pack. I think you are thinking of a 40yr old woman. I feel like people get the age of women who are older mixed up too easily.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Huh?

That ending made no sense at all...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

YOU DID A PRETTY GOOD JOB.

AS FOR THE SPELLING. IF THE PERSON RECOGNIZED THE SPELLING ERROR SHE GOT THE MEANING.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
well written but needs continuation

well written but the way it ended is a striking twist that promises something different from the regular story. it would be good to continue it

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