All Comments on 'Together, Forever! Ch. 12'

you've got some very good stories going; perhaps you should cut down on the quantity and focus more on the quality?

making good stories into daytime soap operas is, well, a bit cheap, even for Literotica! lol

but, seriously, you're quite a good writer; just don't let your prolific-ness get out of control.

a short, emotionally satisfying story that people want to read and re-read many times over, and then recommend it to others, is probably better than writing 10 chapters in 10 days on a soap opera story-line that no sooner than when people finish skimming through they don't remember what they've just skimmed through,,,

and, remember (don't we all?), that sleeping with 1,000 partners is not more likely to get you (a person) more cherishing power/thoughts than sleeping and loving one person PROFOUNDLY throughout one's life --- like it was in HOW DO I LOVE THEE? by Elizabeth Barrett Browning,,,