All Comments on 'Together to Learn Ch. 06'

A very talented author and I will continue to read the balance of your submissions

I read a lot at Literotica and this is one of the best ever. Young people learning together is really hot and I thought it was amazing how masturbating together was even more erotic than most sex scenes. Great writing!

There was one small problem. You never put lube on the inside of a condom or it wiil tend to slide off

I was, however, a bit distracted by the mix-ups of who was with whom, especially during Pam's turn. Larry and Alan's names were switched randomly about five different times during that scene. It happened a couple other places as well.

I really like the plot, and the characterization was good as far as it went. I would like to have gotten to know each of them a bit better, though.

please continue this:);):)