All Comments on 'Tom and Sarah'

by misterJJP

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Nitro70652Nitro70652almost 6 years ago
Well done

I'm not a big fan of stories told with alternating points of view but you seemed to have hit the right formula for it. Usually alternating POVs get so redundant with the same facts from all parties. Good job on that front. Also your hints at other fantasies the husband had give way to possible future chapters in this story line. I look forward to seeing more. It was nice to see very few grammar, spelling and punctuation errors.... makes for more vivid visualizations, as the reader. Thank you.

5 stars.

KidG1000KidG1000almost 6 years ago
So hot!!

I love this story and really hope it continues. Submissive cuck couple domination is my favorite fantasy right now. I can just imagine being Tom in this scenario. My only hope is that a foot fetish element be introduced, Tom submitting and sucking his wife’s toes would add to the fantasy for me. Otherwise this story is perfect and I can’t wait to see what JJ has in store for them next

ConfusedGiantConfusedGiantalmost 6 years ago

Fantastic,Fantastic, so hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Please continue

One of the best stories since a long Time Here in Literotica. Hopefully there is much much more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing

Fantastic story, kept me hard all the way through. Especially like the way Sarah submits and Tom is powerless to stop it. Looking forward to more.

SleepyJamesSleepyJamesover 5 years ago
Love this

Love this story added to my favourites. My wife would never go for this scenario but I'd be there in a second.

Sensual_sub_coupleSensual_sub_coupleover 2 years ago

Our sensual dream come true!

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