All Comments on 'Tom, Helen and Kate Ch. 01'

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don87654don87654about 18 years ago
Good, but could be better

It would have been much more erotic if you had cum in Kate.

pubelesspubelessabout 17 years ago
continue

good start how about chapter two where he shaves the girls and gets shaved too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
would have liked more

I understand that this is only chapter one but I would have liked to read about the end of this threesome all in one chapter. Usually chapter breaks are taken between sex sessions. It is good, but it seems incomplete. Keep.writing!

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