All Comments on 'Tomb Raider: Uncharted Ch. 05'

As a TR fan, I enjoyed this story. Nathan is a great character and I enjoyed how you portrayed Larson as well. Great sex and action scenes. True to their character and story. One advise I would give is to have your writing proof-read as there were many typos and line errors.

Good one. Ya gotta keep writing about Lara Croft and her adventures.

Thanks for the shareing them.

Awesome! Please keep writing about the slutty Lara's taste for adventure and men!