All Comments on 'Torment, Telelapathy, and Tentacles'

This was really good! I love the concept and it was all written so beautifully! :) I'll look forward to reading more from you! :D

linking this to my my girlfriend , she will love this.

Imo she took it a little to easy.

If I would discover something like this I'd probably need a while to comprehend. Then I'd start asking LOTS of questions.

Therefore it was a bit to fast for me to fully enjoy.

But I liked the start and found the rest pretty amusing and interesting.

Erotic, nicely blended areas of sexuality, and included topics not usually written about.

It'd be a great series to write on, maybe even have a few chapters from Lyssa's perspective?

Now that was a super hot story, thank you.

Uh, okay, first of all, Animorphs reference. You are my hero. Also, this is a really awesome story. I dig Alan's design and description, really cool! The way you describe sensations makes them really real, too. Freaky thing is, they're... a cute couple. Weird, and I totally dig. Keep being awesome.

All i wanna say......Animorphs reference FTW. XD

thank you for your magic writing talent =) delicious from start to fin.

pretty adorable n cute :) please write more

This story has "EVERYTHING", that I've EVER looked for, in Erotic Literature — ALIEN ABDUCTION, MIND CONTROL, BONDAGE, TENTACLE SEX, FORCED ORGASMS!!!

Here's hoping that this is NOT "The End" — like Lyssa: "I want MORE…!"

(Maybe, she could become — TEMPORARILY? — "ROBOTIZED"…!)

Exactly what I look for in tentacle sex. I love the idea of tentacle romance, you nailed it. >;3

That was spectacular, not something I would typically go for but exactly what I want a tentacle story to be.

Oh, this is so sweet! This is literally everything I've ever wanted in a this type of story - hot descriptions, love, and cool SF details.

At first, to find a story with clear Animorph-references at literotica , is so cool, especially so many years after the best book series I´ve ever read in my childhood and just therefore, you earn my like!.

Second : This story is very well and hot written .

Allen is such a cutie and he makes a very sweet couple with "his" funny - adorable human-girlfriend.

So, where is his home planet and is there a sexy alien-guy for me too?

No, realy , I do´nt kidding and really beg you for a sequel here , please write more non-human-erotic- stuff , you got an amazing talent!

PS : Don´t be puzzled if my english isnt totally correct.

I´m not a native speaker and live in austria but my knowing is good enough to read and write mostly correct .

Sincerly, and with a big thanks in your direction too !

Miss oddity

This was amazing almost everything I could want in a erotic story! Thanks can't wait for more!

This is a wonderful story with a unique mix of romance, bondage, domination and the quirkiness of mind control and aphrodisiacs..

This was truly a lovely read. Superb job!