All Comments on 'Tormented Teacher Ch. 1'

Sugar sweet

it was a great story keep writing

l gave you two stars...... because you lacked detail, so much detail, could have, should have been inserted...........if you are going to continue to write for this forum, get into their headssssssss, think for one fucking second, what you, as a high school student, would be feeling and thinking, as you sat around, with your so called "circle of influence" your friends, actually, verbalizing, a revengeful plot, against, one of your teacherssssssss, you would pee your pants. To show up in class, day after day, interacting, with the teacher..........you wouldn't be able to talk......unless you are some sort of fucking psychopath...........And thanks to fucking Hollywood, the "redbox" rental centers, have been saturated, with similar idiotic plots.

My point.........fill in the fucking blanksssss, details, details, details, smells, sounds, tastes, how their very skin felt..........To have your female students, willingly, eagerly, excitedly, slide off their soaking wet panties, to present their dripping wet pussies to be, licked and tongued.........they would all but pass out, in utter disbelief, not to mention, the utter shame, you, as an educator, would feel, being forced, to submit, to such a level of debauchery...........Cooooommmmmmmmmeeeeee onnnnnnn Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnn

Have a fucking vested interest in your characters...............these entries are an extension of you, on so many levels, even your very psyche.....

But that is just meeeeeeee

You state the teacher is in a sexual drought. Why??? When was she fucked last? And in what sexual position? Did her last lover satisfy her, or leave her wanting? Was her last partner male or female? So many questions...maybe you could write a sequel to answer these questions for me?

YOMEYO