All Comments on 'Touched Ch. 05'

Please Update soon! I hope they don't get in trouble!!!

This has to be the weirdest futuristic sci-fi i've read. I can't imagine not being able to touch or have close friends without being thought ill. what a deprived people. It's an interesting take on it though and I'm eager to read more. I so hope they don't wind up hospitalized or something. That would be so dreadful.

Thank you for sharing this with us. I've enjoyed reading what there is of it and am looking forward to reading the rest.

Happy Writing!

I loved the parallel that could be drawn between how 'sensualsts' are treated in this world and how gays and lesbians and other groups are treated in our world. It could make someone think, hopefully someone who is bigoted anyhow. Very interesting. I love how Oliver has helped them. It's frustrating how they got sloppy enough to get caught.

Sorry I was late on this one. But I liked it -- and liked finding out that Oliver wasn't a complete grump.