All Comments on 'Training Ch. 23'

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LyndaCurtisLyndaCurtisabout 13 years ago
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loved the new chapters... keep it going.. very hot...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Greta great story. I think beflre to long Jane will need

another man to fuck her along with her son and Bobbie, If bonnie had a strap on it would be hot too. But soon james will be inclded and it will be a 4 way or all of them will service jane. Hot hot hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
So Fucking Hot

Ijust want to get in there and eat both you lush cunts, and get drunk on the nectar from both of your cunts, and keep doing it till I pass out. then start over with fucking you both, taking us all to insane levels of sexual pleasure. I think that there is a clot of you in these stories, and oh to bury my tounge and cock in your overheated cunt and suck and fuck you into next week. Cunt struck UK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Added to the mix.

Bonnie , you have incorpoated the two older women and now possibly the new boyfriend is showing up. Great chapter as usual keep em cummin,ciao.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Ass!

Bobby should do them both from behind, alternating between cunts until he comes. And he definitely should ass-fuck them both, with each guiding his cock into the other's pussy and asshole. And have the women eat his sperm from each other's cunts and kiss each other with it on their tongues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
To answer a question from before

Hell yes Iget worked up writing these stories, what woman wouldn't. And maybe that's why I miss the typos. But I hope you all enjoy reading my stuff and I also

hope dear annony dies a slow death from having is one ball remaining cut. His wife cut the first one off years ago! Bonnie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Pure, unadulterated garbage

And you've managed to drag it out for 23 chapters. That alone must be some type of record for wallowing in the mud.

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2about 8 years ago
Your mother is pure garbage dear annony

We all know you didn't read this and just want to bash the writer. So I gave it a 5 to help the story. You should die a slow and painful death, and soon!!

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