All Comments on 'Training Notes: Chloe's Story Ch. 02'

Fantastic writing.

I really enjoy your breezy, intimate style that invites the suspension of disbelief. The dialogue between the girls sets the story and establishes the characters and the dramatic (and sexual) tension.

You make it all seem so easy but I know that such writing is devilishly difficult. Well done!

I hope that my kudos are appreciated.

My small way of saying Thank You.

- hogwash