All Comments on 'Trapped and Fucked Pt. 02'

I feel kinda bad for really liking this story. LOL. So what happens next?

Really good so far, can’t wait to see where it’s going next

In this case you wanted peek not peak. Syntax and grammar can be a writers' good friends.

More please!!!

Brilliant story so far, I hope there’s lots more to come - I suspect she’s in fjrva long time there

Have a friend, or message another literotica user, and ask them to review before you submit. In Ch 1 perspective switched from “I” to “she” in the same paragraph. In this one her stepfather’s name flip-flopped between Greg and Gerald. That kind of stops the reader and pulls them out of the story.

I crave the vibe this gives off. Pretty awesome story!!!

I came so hard